Portal 'Still Alive' enhanced song

I enhanced the portal song 'Still Alive using much editing and voice writing and I think it is better then the original, check out the song below, and tell me what you think of it. Note however stealing my enhanced version without my permission to claim as your own work will result in your youtube account being banned, hefty fines and maybe some jail time, I do not own this song, all rights belonging to valve, steam and portal are reserved, this song was enhanced for entertainment purposes only, thank you.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=n7vfN2Ek3XE

Portal 'Still Alive' enhanced song